Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

i think i am a stranger in her eyes.



i walk past her
sending tornadoes and blackouts

as air passes through her
              transparent stare.


    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Walk-Free
    August 30, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    i love the phrase "transparent stare"