Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Tango on a table.

Missing image
Tango on a table,
samba in the sea,
rhythmical persuasion, from a storm cloud rhapsody.                             
Bolero on the beach
salsa in the sand                                                       
sensually swaying, to a lovers golden band.
Musical seduction,
amour serenade,
violins with heartstrings waiting to be played.                             
Harmonious caress,
licentious lullaby,
lovers dancing patterns in a dark orchestral sky..
                             

Author notes

Credit: Dance_Me_to_the_end_of_Love_by_mmenathalie

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Oh! this was truly beautiful!! the rhythm is just so soft and lovely!! very enchanting, I truly loved this.. thank you very much for sharing this.. Best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    wow a brilliant poem full of vivid beautiful metorphoric imagery all the way through I realy enjoyed line one right through to line twelve good luck in the contest


  • Iyaden
    August 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Magical! Every last word of it. Beautiful use of dances and a killer last line. It almost sways as you read it