can you see me yet,
can you hear me now?
I hope so...
why not?
I'm the same as you,
I'm different.
always lefted behind,
always lefted in the shadows,
alway forgotten...always invisible to you.
I'm not second,
I'm not the forth,
I'm not even the eigth person.
I'm the one kid who wasn't invited.
I want to be your friend,
I want to hang out,
I want to laugh too.
but for what?
it corrupted me to get in...
it'll just destroy me if I stay in.
Author notes
My Results "Dying To Be Accepted"
You're not like us, that's what you say, because I don't act your way.
I'm an outcast, thrown in the lions den, beaten and broken, forgotten and condemned. Left to live Solitaires second, been this way as long as can remember.
Breaking the bounds will take too much time, I'm leaving this world that I had right behind.
A contest entry
- Which Lyric? Fun :) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended August 29, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Great write. Stereotypes suck....lol. People can be rude and harsh. I tend to stay away from them...
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Peoples way of treating others does differ a lot. I hate stereotypes. I mean they serve their purpose in statistics, but individuals shouldn't be labeled and therefore 'you don't fit in you're not ...' shouldn't be in the vocabulary. People are who they are, end of. Nice take on the lyrics.
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Thats the same one I got...'cept I wont be entering the contest...Anyhow good write
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