Words Spoken so sweetly
Every drop of sweat
All bundled up and thrown away
Pins and needles in everything you say
Little mind and little high
Lowered to tears laughter to cry
Nervous breakdown, swarming prey
Lies in Flesh, Heart left frayed
Sweet surrender to a loving song
Always reminded I didnt belong
"A pill to make you numb
A pill to make you dumb
A pill to make you anybody else"
Loves tenderness or blinded hate
Lies before love, its never too late
Holding back the truth to help the heart
Or Punishing the heart so you can drift apart
No Lies to be told
Just love to hold.
Sweetly captured
Desired shes drained
No truth in love except one thing
The hate and torture it will truely bring
Author notes
No Lies Just Love
Its overrated
there is no such thing as no lies
every relationship has a thick brand of lies that either float in and out of the relationship or it just floats and you never know.
OPTION 4
A contest entry
- everyone loves an options contest :] by etoile.
300 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
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Tell The Truth, Thats All I ask
Comments
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Terrific poem
Gets the reader to think a bit
And I do believe that love has become not so much overrated as it has become a joke, because people don't know the real definition of it.
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Yes that was the concept of overrated its fake now adays
ppl are more in love with the thought of love then rather loving someone because they honestly love and cherish them.
Thanks for the comment XD
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Sweetly captured
Desired shes drained
No truth in love except one thing
The hate and torture it will truely bring
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i loved that ending.
this was emotional, so thankyou
and putting that quote in made it all the more interesting to read.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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"A pill to make you numb
A pill to make you dumb
A pill to make you anybody else"
I LOVE THAT.
haha, very nice write
& good luck -
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Listen to Coma white by marilyn manson
Its outta that song, thats why I have quotations up
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A very bleak way to see love but I can give no facts as to the contrary. I suppose there lies and there are lies. A fine line between what really constitutes honesty and privacy. Liked every line
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this was an amazing write hunn she deserves gold and she deserves someone who only wants to see her happy and nothing less
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