This picture inspires me about a magical girl
One who can go anywhere,
Do anything top to bottom
Such as:
Standing on the moon tall and proud,
A colourful art gallery picture,
A girl in a dream
A magical angel in the sky
That floats down and comes out of the water
Author notes
I hope you enjoyed this poem! 
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest.. Big Points !!! by Sweet Impatience.
1600 points, ended September 14, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This was really an amazing poem, and went well with the picture! And a beuatiful picture at that...
~Stacey~
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You are a beautiful poet
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awww this is so sweet hunny welldone lovely take on the prompt
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I like to think of this magical girl you speak of. She also lingers in my mind, making me wish I could do those things she does. Thank you for writing this poem.
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this is an outstanding poem. you've done an excellent job with the prompt. she does look like she can do all of that.. this is a very refreshing write for me.. its beautiful, has a calm sense about it.
You did an outstanding job with both the prompt & your poem.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Very Very nice. You have a very nice way of putting things. I Love what you see in the pic. I hope that you did well in the contest.
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Really lovely, the picture is very inspiring and I enjoyed your poetry.
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This is exceptional! I love the descriptive wording used in this poem. I know these must be your most sincere feelings as inspired by the art work! Keep writing! I wish you the best in the contest.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Aww I liked this sweetie it wss pretty I hope you write more soon this is a very pretty poem and a lovely picture xx
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Awww she does look as though she can do all of that! A very creative piece, good luck
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This is so beautiful, wouldn't it be so wonderful to stand upon the moon and touch the stars. You are very talented. Best to you in this contest
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You truly amaze me with your imagination and beautiful poetry. Keep writing my precious girl, I look forward to each new poem you write and i'm so proud of you. I love this poem Georgia. Your words are as magical as the girl you write about. Good luck in the contest sweetheart.
Love you lots and lots,
Mum
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Very Creative
told with the stunning world of imagination of magic talent..this dream comes to life as the magical girl is"One who can go anywhere"..if you believe....spectacular!
Conni
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This is a lovely piece of writing for a ten year old.
When I was your age, I wish I had the kind of talent that you are displaying...You really will only get better with age and you have my utmost encouragement and I hope you continue to write for as long as time allows. Lovely piece of work.
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Congratulations on writing poetry at such a young age. That is awesome. Loved the picture used for this poem - and your sentiments expressed are wonderful. Glad you liked the pictures on my author page. Thanks for commenting on that. Keep writing....about magical fairies and all other things too.
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It's a beautiful picture 'floats down and comes out of water' - so good. Well done.
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wow that is awsome i love it and hope you keep on writhing to i can keep on readings.. nice work..
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Hi darling. You're too cute. A lovely poem.
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I did enjoy this poem! Keep writing.
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Lovely poem. She does look like a magical girl, who can do anything. Good luck in the contest!
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Just lovely! well done. You are an amazing little girl.
Slayer
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Cool
I see where you are coming from. Though I am not a girl
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This is a very pretty poem. You are a great poet for your age. Good luck in the contest!
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