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Fairy Fallacies

  Casting dreams into the ocean of divinity

                                          euphony collides with interwind hearts single lullaby.

                                          Dancing in the notes your voice creates as the sister moon

                                          shines upon the watery confession that your lips whisper across

                                          abandoned lips...

                                         

 

 

 

                                                                                     

           Painting winter's breath upon my soul

           I get lost in the fairy tale that your

           eyes promise, as you etch innocence

           of angelic grace upon my back while I softly outline 

           the exhaled love we create.

          

 

Author notes

http://fallnangeltears.deviantart.com/art/Veil-of-Light-25788884
http://gilraen-ar-feiniel.deviantart.com/art/Mother-of-Light-57123389

Title credit goes to.... Jessica..Lol.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    I seriously could get lost in your poem.. its a very beautiful poem. I love how you used both prompts, you've created a masterpiece all within itself.

    excellent job.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • poppa
    September 10, 2008

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    Wonderful write... love the story you have woven, weaving the 2 pics into the one piece... hope and deliverance the over-riding message for me ... good luck in the contest


  • Shadow Lynx
    September 8, 2008

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    Your imagination has a silk lining my dear sis A soothing read which plays delicately on the senses, best of luck in the contest


  • Life Is A Game
    September 6, 2008
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    Wow

    beautifull deep and meaningfull. i love it!!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Wow, excellent take on both pictures! Love how you've combined them, blended together perfectly! Good luck


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    So beautiful in its softness and grace, I love that you have combined more than one of the prompts and made it flow without flaw. Best to you


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    Lovely imagery.

    A word paints a thousand pictures.


  • xCandieKissesx
    August 28, 2008

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    Painting winter's breath upon my soul
    I get lost in the fairy tale that your
    eyes promise, as you etch innocence
    of angelic grace upon my back while I soft outline the exhaled love we create.

    Wow! Now this is AMAZING! I love the imagery and creativity. I would have never thought to write about 2 pics in one poem. Awesome job and good luck!!



  • notorious gold member
    August 28, 2008
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    Fairy Fallacies? <==title?


    • Angelflower
      August 28, 2008

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      Lol.. you would think of a title like that.. I think I'm just going to leave it like this..lol. I can't come up with anything else


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 28, 2008
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    very sweet

    I loved the way the words flowed and what they meant, very impressive

     

    i would have stated

     

    shines upon the watery confession that you whisper across

    abandoned lips sigh....

     

    I really hope that you dont mind i said that, i loved your pictures

    that went with the poem, both of them were penned well

     

    With Respect

     

     

    Rend


  • trekkergirl
    August 28, 2008

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    Loved the pictures. And Loved the poetry with them. Especially the first one... though instead of interwinded could you use the word intertwined... just a suggestion is all.

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