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Last night She went crazy

Not a stranger
Not a friend

and yet I know, last night
was a symbolic end

It was feeling, like a knife
God she put it in and twisted so tight

I saw her normal as could be
and then become somebody I just couldn't see

Raging, seething, blistering anger
It radiated off of her screaming danger

words I didn't even know exist
screeched at me like a fist
I really think I would have rather been hit

It can never be normal again
not after the way she's acted
and the way she's been

I didn't know that she would break
and last night it was much more
than anyone could take

She didn't hurt me
and yet she did

She's not a grown up by any means
yet her stinging words have me
clutching at the seams

I am beaten
yet there is no mark on my skin

She's not a stranger
She's not a friend

and yet she is my sister
though I will never see her that way
ever again

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    August 29, 2008

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    omg, hope. i kno exactly wht u mean. we're kinda going through the same thing. it's so confuzing, b/c you think you hate them, but we must not if their harsh words still upset us.
    you know i'm always here for you. all the way up in hardin...but i'm come get you. anytime, day or night. just then, there's brittany here.....

    awsome poem expressing your feelings about it, it's like your in my mind writting what i feel after a fight.
    but hey, they smoke, so they'll die 1st.
    lol, j/k, j/k (or am i?...)

    --Gooshawn <3 xoxo