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Turn Back Time

Turn back the time,
Retrace my steps
Take back the words
That I never meant to escape my lips

My mind is in a haze
So confused and lost
I mummble words that make you go away
Dear God what have I done?!

Now not only am I lost
I am so terribly alone
Without you to hold my hand
I wander foggy streets, never to be found

Turn back the time,
Retrace my steps
Take back the words
That I never meant to escape my lips

When you showed me the ring
I should have said yes
Instead I had nothing but terrified eyes
And now you'll never see me in a wedding dress

I am so scared
I am living in some isolated world
It is my own fault
I am such a stupid girl

Turn back the time,
Retrace my steps
Take back the words
That I never meant to escape my lips

Darling please
I made a terrible mistake
Won't you come back to me?
Or has your love now turned to hate?

Turn back the time,
Retrace my steps
Take back the words
That I never meant to escape my lips

Author notes

AP name is: A-Daisy-Among-Roses

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  • poetrandy
    August 29, 2008

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    Very interesting & sad romantic poem!

    So sad, so romanic, first love stuff, so different, though! I like this poem, a lot! It's got a good subject & story line, well chosen words. I think you should check the spelling of ment (should probably be "meant" -- this was a slight distraction! Keep up the good work -- your talent shows!