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The Choice

love is not easy.
look at these scars
slash open my heart
under a night full of stars

love is not easy.
i rage and i scream
caught up in the current
of a swift crimson stream

the heart is too tender.
how can it survive
being bared to a stranger
with the sea in his eyes

thunder and lightning
across blackwhite skies
the great blinding angel
in a demon’s disguise

a rock weathers the storm.
the one way to survive
impossible to kill
what was never alive

but i bleed and i die.
rip out my own heart
for one look at your face
could tear me apart

this was my choice.
i set the stakes high
gambling all of myself
without quite knowing why

and so here i stand
steadfast and true
everything i am
i give it all to you.

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  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Powerful expressions

    "and so here i stand
    steadfast and true
    everything i am
    i give it all to you"
    This line speaks to my heart.
    Thank you for your entry
    Robert