the lights are gone and warmth has left
the world seems empty and cold like death
theres nothing, its frightning and as dirty as clean
then you hear that bloodcurdling scream
hear that scream, like its Halloween
like lust and greed are dancing and singing
there sit demons, sucking upon human flesh
the evil incubus dancing with his jar of seamen
the succubus with her controlling hand
flys towards and then she lands
dripping with blood is a skull in her hand
demons of vanity dance around
with drums and trumpets they make a sound
feeding of the life and everyones sins
throwing their corpses in over filled bins
hear more screams, its practically Halloween
more treacherous beings come now to be
here comes a banshee, blasts with a screech
screaming and screaming making the others weep
diobolical happenings come around in their street
its such a scene, its only going to make creeped
careful now then, more of Lucifers Bretheren
Lords of the damned pour upon the warping land
Demons now, the torturers and lords of hell
what about frosty? he'd come but hes surely going to melt
still Demons come around to feed
out come the Possessers of Nero and Cain, schreeching aloud and causing more pain
then comes to dopplerganger to make more clues
transforming into men and women who he knew
then is the rest of this damned crew
everyone will scream, its basically like Halloween
sons of Lucifer and the Daughters of the most obscene...
Author notes
Well, hope you enjoy it
I didnt really know what to write, but hope someone likes it
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST!!!! by amanda vampiress.
525 points, ended September 10, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - This is Halloween! by thorlorn thanatos.
400 points, ended November 23, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I enjoyed this very much. It flows right along and keeps your attention. One small suggestion, I would break it up a bit into stanzas. It gives the reader time to digest the written thoughts in between but overall this is pretty cool
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Very interesting!
I enjoyed reading this poem! It kept my attention all the way through till the end, and I very much liked the rhyme! Good job!
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wooooo!
thanks =)
I enjoy writing stuff like that for people who'll love it like you do (does that make sense?)
good luck with your contest (your doing better than my first one which you should so totally enter)
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