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familiar

my head toss
towards the half open window
is my half veiled attempt
at telling you
not to worry about it,
I'm not mad.
not mad.
so mad.

the concrete lit view of burlingame
blurs
in favor of hair-swept, neckline kisses.
your arms hold me.
& I hold your arms.

dreams
about rooftops
and walking on them.


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  • blackday
    August 30, 2008

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    Really nice stuff dear.
    & haha at the capitals comment.

    It's sad when people can't appreciate an individual's style.


  • tarcus
    August 28, 2008
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    Needs some of the capitals looking at otherwise not a bad attempt I think!