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Shimmer




Shimmer distant light,
that shall guide the sailors way,
in the darkness of the night,
in the deep blue ocean sway.

A glimmer of hope,
when weather has become foul,
when it is so hard to cope,
and the winds begin to howl.

A guiding star,
brings relief to weary eyes,
a twinkle from afar,
under stormy dark skies.

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  • Sandygram
    September 7, 2008

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    What wonderful flow and rhyme you have penned. This sounds lovely when read outloud. A beautiful poem. A pleasure to read this Sunday morning. Thank you for entering. Best of luck. Sandy


  • crimsondew
    August 28, 2008
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    Beautiful write...weaving in hope well....flows well as always...
    All the best in the contest!