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Surging




Dance upon the waves,
as they move in swells and sways,
taken by the tide of rush,
moving in such graceful ways.

Rolling waves of steps,
in the rhythm that is never ending,
taken in the arms of love,
hearing the song the gulls are sending.

Surging only to recede,
with a lap upon the shore,
our footprints in the sand,
shall tell of so much more.


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Dance_Me_to_the_end_of_Love_by_mmenathalie

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  • Angelflower
    August 29, 2008

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    I truly loved the rythm in this piece.. And the imagery is just so vivid, so peaceful.. You did such a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    wow a wonderful poem full of such beautiful true love from your soul I loved every stanza from the first line to the end good luck in the contest