What my ideal husband would be someone who liked to be with me
To see me not my disability to know what my weakness are
Help me to over come them realize some things can not be changed
One he would have to be an animal lover of dog's and cat's
He would like to take long walks with me and my dogs
Someone who would kiss me good by each day say I love you
A person who would call me at lunch say I was thinking of you
That person would have to love to garden not cut off my flowers
When I am afraid he would say everything all right
I would like someone who liked movies and hold my hand during them
Maybe a person who would like to camp out
Here the kicker some one who like to use a chainsaw to cut wood
I heat my home with a wood burner
A person who would help me remodel my home
Hopefully hew would like to build computers
He would have to good with cars work on them and take care of them
Not complain about the dog sleeping with us
A person who would like to write poems and help me proof read
Deep down someone who would understand my learning style
The quality I would treasure the most someone who did not yell
Another quality is to be a team player to explain things
Someone to mean what they say,say what they mean
Since we are dreaming of an ideal husband
He would empty his pockets and put his clothes in a hamper
Clean out the bath tub after using it
To fold and put away his own clothes
It would be a plus if he was a good cook
Liked to grill out side use a smoker
Would not tell me what I can do and let me do it
Teach me how to do things so I could do them my self
The biggest plus is to write things down that he wanted down
Set down together and do a monthly bill plan
Someone who puts family first,does not complain about family gathering
This is really dreaming someone who would like to clean the home and yard
I would like to share information and ideas
Being romantic would be wonderfully nice
Someone to understand why I keep my treasures from my past marriage
Author notes
i will have to come back later to finish my lap top battery going to die
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- An Ideal Husband by Frodofan.
380 points, ended September 10, 2008, 10 entries
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Quite the checklist...
Quite the checklist; I met the majority of qualifications, but I'm already spoken for; I hope you find him. --Joe
Perhaps you would enjoy a potential companion piece - My Proverbs 31 Wife
The link is: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2307399
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Wishful Thinking!
The man you describe would be so much in demand, he wouldn't have time to be a good husband. I sincerely believe the man you describe does not exist.
On the bright side, if you can find a man with half these assets, you will have found someone to treasure!
I enjoyed reading this!
Best of Luck in the contest!
Maureen -
excellent~
This is a great poem for the ideal husband
Since I have had cancer and still have the bone cancer...hubby helps cook...he can cook some mean chicken that is one dish I never learned to master..Bruce my son has been helping too..cook and wash the dishes...
Huby loves to work....mow the yard...and yes he even puts away his own clothes and helps do my washing....
I think I will hang on this man of mine..........
Rare & few and far between
Best of luck in the contest...tis a winner in my book
I have up 3 new ones drop by when ya can they are shorties
Love this
You too sis
Susan~~~
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hahaha, this is cute :]
don't we all have ideas for our ideal mate :]
cute!
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Looks like you gave this a lot of thought, it is at a time, I'm sure when you have reflected on a lot of things that relate to marriage and companionship past and present. best of luck to you in this contest my friend.
Dennis
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Ok, I guess you're not finished but a couple of notes:
#1 Punctuation would make this a lot easier to read.
#2 Saw some typos. Check.
#3 I like the ending. It's sweet.
#4 Clean out the bath tub after using it? ???
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