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Warm Snow

Snow is beautiful



But deadly



How can this be?



No one knows



Who could think it can be deadly



The people who got hurt by it know


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  • Lisa.
    October 1, 2008
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    very good poem its realy good wowwwwwwww!


  • LionessK silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    An interesting write... much said in two lines. A few typos but this has potential. You are off to a good start. I like the subject.
    Thank you for sharing your words.
    I hope you will keep writing.


  • trekkergirl
    August 28, 2008
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    okay