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i want my wings, to smile, and love

If I could have a perfect life
There would be no end
Everything in my life
And others I love
I would protect
If I could have wings
I would fly them far away to a paradise island

A dream beyond hills and clouds
My friends would have
Their dreams fulfilled
Their loves would be there
And their hates would go somewhere else
If a dream existed in reality all would be well

Tears of happiness and sadness
Yet they would learn of their path towards happiness
The past that hurt them would be there’s
But the future would be more possible

I would fly and see their memories of past
If I could have done that now....
                    Maybe it wouldn’t have been so bad...

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  • piccola silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    Nice dream and it is dreamed not solely for you but for everyone you hold dear. The past that caused pain is still there though. Why not let them forget any past pain?