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unexpected

I never saw it coming
I didn't feel the spark
I clung to our friendship
the way you supported me

I never saw it coming
the floodgates that would open
the feelings so deep inside
the compassion and comfort

I never saw it coming
when you held me close
curled up on the couch
watching the movie

I saw it happen
the fireworks
the flooding
of feeling and emotion

I finally saw it
the kiss that changed my life
the kisses that I get
on a daily basis

I finally saw
the truth in feeling
the connection
of our souls

I finally saw
the one who
puts all others to shame
the other half of my soul

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so many things change when you're whole

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  • strangerforeigner
    September 3, 2008

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    Sometimes it can be so shocking to have our eyes opened to the things that have been right in front of us all along. Thanks for entering and good luck in the cotest!


  • x0charlie-redhead0x
    August 27, 2008

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    wow

    very powerful. And I'm really glad that someone is able to articulate a situation as such. fabuolous write!