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Beneath the tulip tree

I will expire here,

On the outside

Eternally looking

in...

At the velveteen bed of violets

Entombed vibrantly within.

Reticent, the daffodil sentinels are

Languid in their vigilance,

Gentle in their valor.




To their All Mighty Wind they bow;

Their manes billowing and blooming

As he rushes through his legion.

Golden radiance spills forth as dew

from these diminutive suns.




I entreat them,

With pleading eyes,

To let me in.

Oh, please...do let me in.




beneath my feet, ran raw by youth,

The roses bleed from exposure and debris.

Reticent still, their yellow eyes stare gleefully,

Indifferent to my request

To rest my heart behind the mesh and wire.




Alas! Such fields are not for me,

Nor are such desires.

I know to where I must endeavor,

My feet must tread upon these petals still,

Now and forever,

Burning with cold uncertainty

Scorching infinitely...

Until I lay peacefully

In my floral sepulcher

Beneath the Tulip Tree.













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  • Genevieve79 silver member
    January 8

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    Oh the tulip tree! I love this, and the dark and beautiful mix together for a profound and image packed read. I can smell the flowers and see the cemetery...

    great write and thanks for entering! good luck!


  • Flowergirl
    September 29, 2008

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    very nice i loved it but isnt it to early for you to worry about your expiration date....great write i loved ti keep it up...