Passionate lips pressed firmly upon yours
I love you so; is spoken in soft tongue
Thoughts overflowing, lust seeps through damp pours
Two souls intertwine, where songbird’s hymns hum
Lines whispered within lover’s lips divine
In-between signs of such heavenly bliss
Inspiration fills my quill with red wine
Bright stars all align for my angel's kiss
I reach pinnacles of how my heart soars
As you place such grace upon my own song
Twirling desires touch shivers to cores
Ignited with kiss, now our love’s so strong
Softly we caress each other anew
This kiss speaks silently, babe I love you
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Need Some Love
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Beautiful write full of passion and love. I like it. A perfect entry for the contest...thanks for that and best of luck.
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love it, sooo well worded! I love line :Ignited with a kiss. It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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great
this is very well written!! i entered the same competition and i must say you did a very good job with sticking to the question asked... good luck xx -
excellent
Lines whispered within lover’s lips divine
In-between signs of such heavenly bliss
Inspiration fills my quill with red wine
Bright stars all align for my angel's kiss
I reach pinnacles of how my heart soars
As you place such grace upon my own song
Twirling desires touch shivers to cores
Ignited with kiss, now our love’s so strong
nice poem.wellw riiten.loved the above lines -
truly beautiful. i love how you captured the real essence of love at its best. amazing read.
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Ermmmm....wow....Ok my dear brother you know how I feel about reading these...lol
Excellent imagery...wow..
Many blessings
~A~
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I Love This...
wow...
as in WOW!!!
sorry but there's nothing more I could say...
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Good
Great poem It flows very nicely
good content, it's good to see poetry with thought. Inspirational and help for others
Very well done a great poem There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. I look forward to your next
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Ahhh what a topic for a sonnet
This just flows and reads divinely.
All the best wioth this
gaylene
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Ah...The joys of true love!
Excellent imagery here! Wonderful word couplings! I am impressed beyond belief! This was so soft and pure! Dramatic effect! Standing ovation from me! Kudos to you for such a beautiful, esoteric poem! Good luck in the contest!
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Oh! this is really beautiful! so soft and yet tenderly expressed.. This just makes the girls sigh..lol. I really loved this.. You did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing!! best ofluck!!
Angel
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the passion and feeling and intimacy ....all are very well expressed here
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my dearest this write breathes so much love and passion held not only in the heart but in the unspoken messages of loves inklings sent through the fires of a passionate kiss. Your wife is one very lucky lady to have the honors of sharing the passionate wonders of your heart and soul through your kisses and warm embraces. much love always xxxx well done and many blessings always xxxx
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Another beautiful write, from the master's hand. Uniquely beautiful and intimate. LOVELY!
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beautiful
another great write from your pen and heart
rhyming none the less, great flow too
best wishes to you and yours
Rhonda
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your so erotically delicious mushy you burn baby when your not even trying good luck honey in the contest
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Wow, this is incredibly written ! I absolutely love your writing style, and I must might have to read more of your poems =) Beautiful explanation of a kiss. Good luck in that contest! ♥
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