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[ This isn’t a poem ]

This isn’t a poem
To say am sorry
(Yes I stole that line
But no one cares)
This is all I can think of
To say how I feel
Love
Happiness
Freeness
And
Usefulness
But only when I’m with you
And I always want to be with you
No matter what might be thought
Because away from you
All I feel is
Longing
And boredom
You brighten my life
And make me feel loved
And I always want that feeling.
This isn’t a poem
Of I’m sorry
(Yeah I know I stole that line)
This is a poem to let you know
That I always want to be with you.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    October 30, 2008

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    Wonderfully written. Different than what I normally see. That is why I like it so. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa~~