If I had known
about the poison
I still wouldn't have put it down.
But when I heard the
scorning laughter
from he who poisoned me
I knew I had to come back for more.
His life was taken
His skin too.
His smile no more.
My soul at peace...at last.
A contest entry
- Quickie Anyone??? You Know You Want To... by Sweet Impatience.
800 points, ended September 5, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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I like this poem a lot.. you did an excellent job with the prompt. guess he got what he deserved huh? revenge sometimes is sweet. Excellent take on the prompt..
great job with your poem
good luck in the contest
kat
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