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Enclosed Affections

When I sleep
My eyez closed so peacefully
Angelz are watching over me one of the faces I see
Belongz to the one who
Lovez me ever so gently
Kisses me ever so sweetly
And hugs me ever so perfectly
Silent tears I cry
Only heard by my true angel
Who always seems to lovingly wipe
Them from my heart and soul
Fah’eva holding each other tightly
Eva’ so tightly
Fah fearz of eva’ letting go
Runs thru our headz
Our love eva’ so obvious
My many thoughts of you
My many thoughts of us as one
Scared of losing you
Not wanting you to leave
I begin to throw myself at you completely
My self-satisfaction with your fulfillment……..

……2 Be Continued……

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  • davidwright silver member
    September 4, 2008

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    That's a beautiful piece I particulary enjoyed the colloquialisms "eva and so forth" it added a new dimension to the narrative. Happy trails