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A unison wave

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Where the roses unfurl
take my hand and twirl.

As the sea cascades
with a soft Harmonie.

We'll dance through
the quicksilver twine.

 

As  you caress your

feet across the shore.

 

You cleanse my 

amour forever more .

 

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Prompt: Picture Please Credit: Dance_Me_to_the_end_of_Love_by_mmenathalie

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    This was really soft.
    I really loved the feel of this,
    and the imagery was beautiful as well.
    Thank you very much for sharing!!
    Best of luck in the contest!


    Angel


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    Beautiful love overflows in such a delicate way
    Wonderfully written and I awe in this one hun
    Love it
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie x