Verse 1:
It's 8 o'clock, take you down to the beach at 9.
Drive this road, show me a good time.
Trust you, I'll try, but I can't guarantee.
We'll test each other's will and how you'll see.
Slip your delicate arms around my neck.
Please tell me when and keep me in check.
Chorus:
Sweet temptation my beautiful girl.
Light the fire and make my world.
Place your hand where you will.
Make the stars twirl until.
Separate from each line curve and swirl.
Lovely temptation my beautiful girl.
Verse 2:
It's a long drive, no small talk for now.
Radio speakers find the missing sound.
Moonlight filters the scene laid before.
Windows attached we'll find the right door.
Vision clouded, blind to the problem that stands.
Tonight, we run, solution in hand.
Chorus:
Sweet temptation my beautiful girl.
Light the fire and make my world.
Place your hand where you will.
Make the stars twirl until.
Separate from each line curve and swirl.
Lovely temptation my beautiful girl.
Verse 3:
Headlights dim, whisper words, secrets kept.
Find the place where our lips first met.
Discover and explore our hidden feelings.
Salty waves rise, the fear we're concealing.
Show me you love me, show me everything's fine.
We're making love down on the beach and it just turned 9.
Author notes
A song I wrote for my girl......er well she's not anymore
She's my true love. But she left me.
Yes I am a lesbian. I don't care what any of you think.
I love her.
S a m a n t h a M a r i e
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel It : 3 Option Contest! by BeautifulDisaster9.
875 points, ended September 21, 2008, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow, I love it! Even without the tune, the lyrics are quite musical.
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Thank you
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This is beautiful, really... Your first love is always your first love, and you will never forget this girl; she was obviously a part of your life for a reason, and whatever it was will be revealed to you in due time
& amen to your ANs, sistah! You deserve to be proud of who you are, so keep laughing in the faces of the haters; always remember that hate cannot stop love
Well done!
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Thank you : DDDDD
I'm glad someone understands!! Thank you for your inspiring words.
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wow very good write bravo thanks so much for your entry and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
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Thank you
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A M A Z I N G
If I wasn't in a relationship at the moment I would....wow I love you!!!! you are the most...just...so perfect...you don't even know. Your talent inspired me to draw like wild fire blazes through the fall grass. You inspired me to write....you are my Queen of poetry, music, and just everything.
Wow
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i love you toooo huney!! thanks
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hahah bad asssss
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wow sam, your my hero
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