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Fish Catcher (Haiku)



long sharp pointed tail
crest is shaggy stands on ends
modern spiked hairdo

watches intently
indulge on fancy crayfish
dining a la  carte

crystal clear waters
reflection of sun setting
golden king fisher

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Very good I think the last one was the best
    but good imagery here.


  • crimsondew
    August 28, 2008

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    lovely description here...love the last haiku...
    A tanka for it :

    Coveted fisher stands
    basking in proud glory


    All the best in the contest!