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The Fallen One

I'm better then everyone
a more perfect angel
here in heaven
My wings
painfully change
as I plummet
It is here I make
a home for us all
the abandoned ones
An eternity of
living and smoldering
into nothingness
No one will ever miss
not even the god
who claims to still love you
You the sinner I understand
continuously I will let you down
making you hurt ever more
For the wrong I have done
realization came too late
To only start again
millions of years ago
then I wouldn't have thought
I'm better then everyone
a more perfect angel
here in heaven
Too late now though for
the already fallen ones so I
work to corrupt innocents
To have them fall
as deep as I have
revenge is so sweet

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  • blackrosesteph
    September 6, 2008
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    revenge is so sweet. oh how I agree with that. good poem