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Her to Know

Cold tile hospital walls surround...Echo breathing of life support the only sound ... Her eyes closed so tight ...My heart whispers dont give up the fight ...Holding her hand was the only thing I could do ... Silent prayers that she would know you ...You were so tiny , learning to walk ...if she was only able to talk ... Her words would've been ones of joy ...To know her daughter gave birth to a handsome little boy ...Today you stand so tall ...She's at rest now an angel on call ...

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  • Flowergirl
    August 30, 2008

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    that is beautiful i loved it..it was sad though....well good luck in your contest and hope to read more....

  • piccola silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    what is your dream here? that she doesn't die ... would you go back in time to make her well ... tell me what the dream is not just the happening in your lives.