Oh...light house can I borrow your light?
I need it for my fight
For the darkness deep inside
For my heart to beat again
Your light will guide me through
For one day I might stand on my feet
Rise above my need
Reach and touch the sky
Oh...light house can u shine bright?
Compass my soul through the night
Loneliness is all I know
Inanity is all I show
Let me sit by your side
For one day I might find my way home...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Sandygram.
650 points, ended September 7, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hey honorable winner, great job you have done here. I can relate to light houses, I've recently saw the Ocean for the first time, and the lighthouses captured me, as did you poem. It amazes me how well I can relate to the entirety of your poem.. that must mean that you've done an awesome job.. bravo, and congratulations for your award.
Ron
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Thank you
YaY my first award. I like how it looks in my page
.Your feed back always means so much to me, because I know how a wonderful writer you are. I am glad you can relate to this poem, I just write from my heart..Hope everything is going well for you.Take care
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You have penned these heartfelt and sad feelings so well. Many will relate to them. Nice imagery. Thank you for entering. Best of luck Sandy
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