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Eternal Tango by the Sea!

Dedicated to all sea dancers!

 

 

Dancing to the music of the sea,
Two lovers held close we see!

The romance of the nightime dance,
Has these lovers in a trance!

Marry me he said to her,
Before wining and dining and romancing there...

The dark clouds and night fall,
Not detering their romancing at all!

Oh how love weaves magic day and night,
Dancing in hearts and minds a light so bright!

Tangoed to entrancing perfection,
They display their deep love and affection..

Like no one in the world exists but they,
As the onlooking birds in flight swing and sway..

The ebbing tide on the ocean and shore dark,
Dancefloor almost invisible what a lark!

If music be the food of love play on,
My darling my love is for you the only one!

I will love you now and for evermore,
Our dance will last eternally on the shore!



Copyright:k:August 2008

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
Contest Picture Prompt by Angelflower
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419193
I've always loved the ocean and music.. And I randomly dance
wherever I'm at..Lol. so I fell in love with this picture..
Write something.. Moving and beautiful..
The Usual Rules Apply
15 poets
10-20 lines (no more then 20)
Prompt: Picture Please Credit:
Dance_Me_to_the_end_of_Love_by_mmenathalie
Be creative and have fun..
Angel
Enter this contest
* This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be
able to see your name.
* Closes in 12 days, or after 2 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 300
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem

Picture Credit: Dance_Me_to_the_end_of_Love_by_mmenathalie

Picture Depicts:
Male and female tangoing in a trance on a dark moonlit
beach.

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    This was really romantic! you did such a wonderful job! I really love the imagery in this.. so heartfelt and beautiful!! thank you very much for sharing this! I really loved it! best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    wow a beautiful poem full of some most touching emotions of true love I love your images to did you make the border yourself good luck in the contest


    • Kazytc
      August 29, 2008
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      Thanks Millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      I did indeed make the background hope you like it!
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX