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Music Box

Speak of it not
Cover those hearing vessels
Shutter the two holes in your face
That belie the balls for eyes

Can't tell you what you are
Cannot speak

Can't tell you how sounds sound
Cannot hear

Can't know what you look like
Cannot see

Twisted the head around and around
On the precious treasure
Twirling round and round
On ballet feet

Snap

...Oh dear

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  • DulceMeli
    March 4

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    O.o

    Interesting I wonder what happened to the dancer (or who ever the other character was)...!

    Awesome narrative poem! ^_^

    ~Meli♥


    • Teufelstamme
      March 13
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      Honestly I don't really remember. I was kinda out there when I wrote this one, but thank you Meli! -hug-

  • DemonicChanel420
    August 28, 2008
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    This is a very interesting poem, the wording is great and I loved the ending!