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symphony of the sea

will you dance with me
to the symphony of the sea?
and let these uncharted waters
be a course set to lands anew
where you and I
may fly
like water sprites
that dance and ride the unicorn waves
as they crash into the shore
so...
will you dance with me
to the symphony of the sea
once more...?

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  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    Oh this was so sweet.. You did such a wonderful job.. I really love the imagery here it was very vivid and beautiful.. Thank you very much for sharing this.. I really loved it! Best of luck!

    Angel


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008
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    a wonderful poem with some wonderful imagery in these lines eight-nine good luck in the contest