For ears that do not hear,
for eyes that do not see,
for hearts that do not know your love,
Lord, Blame me! Blame me!!
For days they smear your name,
and insult and bring you pain,
for all the hate i see,
Oh Lord, Blame me! Blame me!!
Father, please forgive me,
I know not what to say,
for all the hardness in their hearts,
the blame is mine today.
A contest entry
- the simple truth.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 30, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dalaney Contest 9 'Feelings' by Sue Cardwell.
650 points, ended September 7, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - a prayer to God... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 10, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entring once again..
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Congratulations on the bronze trophy. An excellent poem with good rhyme and flow and a pleasure to read.
All the best
Sue and Jeff -
Thank you for your entry in the Dalaney contest 'Feelings'. An interesting and deep poem.
All the best in the judging of this contest.
Sue and Jeff
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Touching
This poem is very deep and touching because this person (or you) is willing to take the blame for others' actions.
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wow, thanks, im so glad that i'm not the only one who understands the underlying feeling behind what i write!!
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