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Conformed

When shadow-boxing

 in a world  of high hopes...

 

beware sucker-punchs  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Picture prompt "C"

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  • Desire gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Conformed
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: shadow-boxing- when reading this phrase- I kept being shown reference to Real Estate- also reference to Foreclosures- for some reason being shown the underlining verbage in contract signed- Re: words: sucker-punchs- I counted as one word like shadow-boxing and in re: to the spelling of punchs- the word punchs- I am showing in dictionary as punches- butttttttt to be honest- re: sucker-punchs- in the dictionary only showed me the singular- not plural so I know what You meant~ not all dictionaries have similar examples- but I am one that if I notice something or have a question- I ask or mention- hoping the Poet would not mind for I sure would like to know~ also while reading Your words again, I am shown reference to spider man type of individual- scaling walls- but underneath the costume- an ordinary person trying to make it in a world somewhat focused on reaching perfection and wild as it may sound- I am getting reference to being too hard on self- like with expectations However this to be interpreted
    Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully the above comment makes some sense~
    Powerful take on the prompt ~
    Excellent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 1, 2008

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    well done my dear friend in times with such aspiring wants and dreams yet to accomplish with incredible hopes; yet, often we get shot down in our darkest od hours. best wishes and many blessings always xxx


  • Angelflower
    August 30, 2008

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    How interesting!! You did such a wonderful job I really liked this! it's different and unique but.. beautiful in it's own way.. Best of luck in the contest!!


    Angel