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Perfect Storm

Perfection has its flaws
And our love has them all

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  • Desire gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Perfect Storm
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: Perfection has its flaws- for some reason while reading this portion- I am reminded of how nobody is Perfect- the outer appearance may seem flawless- but there are many cracks in the structure- a person can appear calm, cool and collected but be an emotional train wreck- I am reminded of how the storm can change direction like a person changing his or her mind However this to be interpreted
    Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully the above comment makes some sense~
    Powerful take on the prompt ~
    Excellent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    August 29, 2008
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    Loves i flawfilled perfection