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(a)maze


  (a)maze to
the sky
  lies in wait
where
  feathers fly.

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  • Desire gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: (a)maze
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: lies in wait- very interesting piece this is and kept seeing twists and turns- in reference to (a)maze~ as if a fledgling learning how to fly- the wind currents also obstacles- basically becomes a challenge for creature learning how to take to the skies- and after reading again- I am shown two hands cupping a rehabilitated dove- and releasing it into the *maze*- However this to be interpreted
    Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully the above comment makes some sense~
    Powerful take on the prompt ~
    Excellent images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • movedon
    August 29, 2008

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    Whew. Ten word restrictions really bring out the best in some poets, especially you! Awesome work with this one.

    Warmest,
    Mylee