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what would happen if I didn't have you

how do you expect me to live with out you,
f I dont have you feels like my heart stops,

If I didnt have you in my life,
I wouldnt have the life I have now,

I would die if I never have you in my arms again,
thats why I want you to be here,

I want you to hold me tight,
I love you baby always,

I know what would happen if I didnt have you in my arms once more.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    Yes..this is the strength of love and when you discuss it in poetry it relates as it is the life..though it is true as well..wonderful indeed..

  • GoodbyeAP
    August 27, 2008

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    awww.. i know that feeling.. the thought really makes you wonder..

    well done