Conformed perpetuity
grappled thoughts
~ ascending ~
venerating peace
under lucid skies
Author notes
PROMPT:
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10 words of wonder
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 10 Words XI - by Desire.
700 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow! What a read! This is beyond words! I am not sure what to say... Kinda left me speechless
Congrats on the HM!
and love
Nyetta
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Love This,
Name of my book, "Lucid Skies of Love"
So you know I dig that, your word use here made an impact.
Thanks for sharing you, and keep up the wonderful works sis.
-Timothy, your bro, the poeticweaver~
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yea hun i know - i have the book and love it - i need to talk to you sometime about it ~hint autographing lol lol
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Conformity
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: grappled thoughts- for some reason while reading- I kept getting reference to post office- like letter received-or mailed out- but focal point- post office- I'm being shown the inside of this place also seeing a paper as if tri-folded- mention of spilling emotions - expressions of the Heart written- while reading Your verse again- for some reason seeing a broken china cup-and reference to it being glued back together However this to be interpreted
Whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully the above comment makes some sense~
Powerful take on the prompt ~
Excellent images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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You've painted a peaceful image within your 10 wonderful wordsI think you have done an exellent job on this write.Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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