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In Ruins

Am I Broken?
Damaged or destroyed?
If I had been marked fragile
Would you have been more careful handling me?

These bruises now are symbols of my damaged state
No broken arms or legs,  but I am dented in my mind and face
You promised to take care of me, to hold me close
Not to throw me on the floor and hit me 'till I lost my pulse

Now I am broken
Damaged and destroyed
I no longer exist, I am garbage
No, I can not be recycled or reused
I am worthless, gone..........

                                             forever ruined

 

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  • The Drifter
    August 28, 2008

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    And so it ends--the final stage of abuse, the final act--destruction.
    Well Written and it flows perfectly.
    bw

  • razorbladz
    August 27, 2008
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    i know how that feels
    keep it uo i like it


  • peregrin
    August 27, 2008

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    Wow... um
    such real emotion is felt when reading this.
    Coming from someone who has been abused and hurt, I love it! I think it is well written and very true... and um.. wow, I don't know what to say...
    Great work!!!

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