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Star Catcher

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He can capture a star in a single stanza,

write the wind with cosmic breath,

sent wings into the mind through his quill

and flood the heart in Tsunami thoughts

as if his pen was groping your soul,

tracing its secret and turning them into poetic sparkle.

 

Each line an explosion in emotions,

images at his finger tips,

vivid and powerful,

being the  fiery flashes of the purest invention.

 

What majesty that literature might define

by the muse's crest upon a page,

his sapphire expressions truly shine,

a cherished gem of inked artistry,

adding the splendor of such masterful facets

to the jewels one holds as treasures.

 

Pausing along the path of scrolls,

to offer in simple phrase

this modest token of appreciation

for the brilliant dazzle in creativity and joy

GreenHrtPaleMoon

has blessed upon others

and graced as fireworks in our personal skies.

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  • carole21
    November 24, 2008

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    a beautiful entry . . liked "write the wind with cosmic breath" and "a cherished gem of inked artistry" . . congrats on the bronze

  • ecrivain01
    September 8, 2008
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    Very nice ...

    and very nicely done.


  • Age of Rain
    August 28, 2008

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    *Jaw Drops* This is absolutely stunning! I ADORE this!

    'He can capture a star in a single stanza,
    write the wind with cosmic breath,'

    I love 'cosmic' imagery and you blew me away with yours!
    *marvels at its beauty*
    'Tsunami thoughts' is a very striking phrase, and it kicks major a**!
    The connection between 'groping' and 'tracing' is subtly beautiful.

    'Each line an explosion in emotions,
    images at his finger tips,'

    I am so touched by this! It is a vivid image on its own. Picturing someone picture things. *laughs* Wonderful.

    'vivid and powerful,
    being the fiery flashes of the purest invention.'

    THAT IS SO GOOD! 'Fiery flashes' is wonderful alliteration and purest invention just excellent phrasing.

    A bit of rhyme done SOOOO well in the third stanza!
    'muse's crest' and 'sapphire expressions' are marvelous phrases as well.

    'inked artistry' is lovely.
    'splendor' is actually one of my favorite words! 'masterful facets' is just awing.

    'Pausing along the path of scrolls,
    to offer in simple phrase'

    I loved both how that read and the delightful emotions it evoked. Brilliant use of simplicity!

    'and graced as fireworks in our personal skies.'

    awww! Beauteous and I loved it! This poem was gorgeous and though I am biased (for obvious reasons) I feel that is was superlatively writ. Thank you so much for the honor of this dedication.


  • Never Fall in Love
    August 28, 2008

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    A wonderful tribute written to a very special person [did I mention he;s wonderful too]


  • Dienush
    August 28, 2008

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    I like the imagery here. The title is particularly beautiful and what you say about him is very nice. Thank you for writing this

    ~Diana


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    beautiful~

    This is beautiful as always
    The imagery is amazing...
    You constantly amaze me...wish I could write like this..
    Exception poem lil brother and best of luck in the contest
    Great tribute and this is a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Your lil sis
    Susan~~~

  • Virginia Logsdon
    August 27, 2008
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    Beautifully written! This poem reminds me of why you are on my favorites list!


  • Desire gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oh My this is a Beauty of a dedication Sweetness
    I'm Honored to have met his acquaintance also seen his comments which Inspire the Poet~
    Excellent write and touch of character
    Love this~
    I imagine this will bring a HUGE smile
    especially with *sapphire expressions*
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~


  • StarEyes
    August 27, 2008

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    My Dear Brother,

    I love tributes, and this one is just beyond words! The magic in your words, dances and warms the heart of all that gaze their eyes upon this page. This is amazing my brother!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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