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bits and pieces.

remember the blue blue skies?
remember the puffy white clouds?
remember not knowing the lies?
when the voices weren't quite so loud?

i wish i didnt but i do
i wish i didnt have a clue
wish i could forget
why theres so much pain
you and i, we both know who






its valentines day
i wish that you'd stay
but you go
and have fun
in your own
little
macrebre way






you told me to look for you
underneath that star
that one we found that night
when we stayed up for so long
we fell asleep together forever
at first sight
of first light

i'm alone now
and watch the barren sky
im looking for our neverland
our island
shining in the sky
where time stands still
and together forever we'll stand
the space between our toes
filled with soft white sand






i remember the day
that i lost you
not in the city
the jungle
the sahara
or the sea

not to man
woman or child
or any combination
of the three

i lost you to time
i thought you'd never be mine
never belong to me
my life was a mess
and insde my mind
you'd be likely to find
all that remains
shrouded in thick darkness
the kind that would keep a secret
at the bottom of a coal mine.

Author notes

my first pile of bits and pieces. enjoy the morsels!

ask anything, any comment is nice. hate it or love it, just let me know.

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  • Zu.angela
    September 9, 2008
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    you roc


  • FelineMuse
    August 27, 2008

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    Mmmm... Well, the poem's subject matter is sweet. I do suggest that you use less obvious rhyme. It makes it a little too sing-songy and detracts from the meaning.