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misjudging u and me

i said i {love} you
  that i had for awhile.
u looked at me like i was *CrAzY*
  it hurt me
like u R
      I
        P
        P
        E
        D out my ~heart~
  i thought you liked me to,
but u just ^laughed^
  i dont know why
was it because your "friends" were near by?
  later i T
          H
          O
          U
          G
          H
          T and decided u probably werent worth it...
then later you :called:
  said you [loved] me to...
i wasnt sure what to think.
  i stil dont !know!
and * * i did
  then we _hung_ out...
made love under the moonlight,
  &now u wont even talk to me&
whats wrong?
  what did "i" do?
i shouldnt of had sex with u...
  but nothing was stopping me...
now i b $confused$
  supposably a <-whore->
and sadly i have to aGrEe

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  • Justmenow
    September 23, 2008
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    a beautiful poem with complex emotions and just because yopi had sex with someone you love does not make you a whore, keep up the great writing


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Awe.. What a sad piece.
    I would have too say you are probly not a whore if you think you are. Most people who are dont know it. LOL

    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Lonely Christina
    August 27, 2008

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    ur not a whore hunni...a girl tht has sex with sumone she loves and trusts is not a bad person at all. i love you and plz get this asshole out of ur life
    xoxo- christina