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Kiss

Kissing comes in many forms my child,
some from mom some from Dad then some wild.
The first kiss you feel your heart beat within,
and those who can see you from the side  it makes a heart within body and chin.

The body has an electric current that flows about the shell,
it's where all our senses become shocked when you kiss and tell.
Many young people feels this within their first kiss,
but believe you me you will see many upon your list.

Some people knows how to kiss,
some people don't.
It's something you learn as you go.
Times you will shy away,
for their breath would wake the dead.
And to save yourself,
you will turn your head.

Oh but the kiss it should be special,
not something to just give away.
For your lips are the keys to your heart they say.
Whispers of I love you many times you will hear,
but honey don't you believe it till you are grown my dear.

For your heart strings are tied to those lips,
and the mind grasps every word.
He will make you feel special and give you gifts,
tell you its true all you have heard.

Then when you go beyond the kiss and give yourself away,
that special person will break your heart they say.
Leaving you with memories of choices you made in time,
and believe me honey within a kiss they try to steal your mind.



Author notes

For the child just learning kisses are OK jUST DONT GO BEYONG THE KISS I pray until you become a woman and know life and its twists and turns kiss yet keep your body safe for love truly has to be earned

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  • strangerforeigner
    September 3, 2008

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    This seems a little more like an essay than a poem. I like what you have to say, but maybe a prose, or even a children's story, approach would be better. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!

  • sunshinegirl
    August 27, 2008

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    How true my friend! You did a great job on this one! What a wonderful way to share knowledge with the younger generation!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta