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left home
at one-eight
no longer matters
what they think
their hopes
their dreams
no longer made
for me to please

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  • shysky
    January 23
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    That's often true. When we move on with our lives at once the things that mattered to those we walked away from cease to matter. Until something reminds and brings back all that heartbreak to begin with. Then its hard enough just to simply hold yourself together and still breathe.

    Well done, I like this one. You seem to have a flair for being subtle in your writing and I enjoy that.