Your eyes were filled with so many lies
They were overflowing bby.
You took the needle to your skin
The stairs went for a swim
Smoking your life away
Partying every day
That ice was in control
You didn’t have anything to say
Careless maybe but hey its ok
Whatever makes you feel better [right]
-wrong-
Drug overdose and suicide
Pain to real couldn’t even cry
The ropes embrace a tragic mistake
You cracked doll and now you sleep
Cold as ever what to do
-nothing your gone its over you see-
Forever though ill miss you &&
All I knew you could be.
Author notes
RIP nessa
who passed Aug26,2008
3:17 am
age 22
love always.
Comments
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wow...
sorry to hear of your loss. its a hard thing to loose someone from the grips of addiction and just in general loosing someone.
this is a powerful message, thanks for sharing this
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Lynn
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Welcome to AllPoetry
The soft intensity of your words is overpowering; an excellent expression of emotions and thoughts regarding the loss of someone close
Just one thing, what is 'bby' in your second line? Is it meant to be 'baby'? Just curious.
Excellent poem!
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aw babe this is so sad. I'm sorry this happened. I can see a bit of myself in this and that's pretty sad and scary. Things need to get better. I love you bunches babe. forever and ever
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