Every morning I wake up, not happy,
Not happy because I wake to live through another day,
Every day that goes by, it gets harder to live through it,
Because I've lost so much, my heart has been burnt so many times,
All I want to do is die and not worry about what tomorrow holds,
Every day I wake, I take a look at my knife,
Think to myself about using my knife on myself,
But what stops me? I don't know,
Why do I stop? I can not answer,
All I know is that I want this pain to go away,
The only way I know for the pain to go away,
Is for me to dissappear,
Leave this life that I sit daily pondering on,
Every morning I wake up, a little more pissed each day,
Each day I wake, that knife looks taster and taster,
But why do I even think that way? Could it be because I'm
depressed?
In the wrong side of the world?
Or is it because what I want doesn't want me?
One morning I will wake and take my life,
To end all my suffering and unhappiness,
That knife and I will finally have our talk,
And my blood will run,
Every morning I wake, not happy,
But I know I won't live to see tomorrow,
Author notes
I choose number 1, I hope you like it. PLease everyone let me know what you all thought. It's my first piece in sometime. Thanks
Ray
A contest entry
- Just Let Me Fade Away.... (Options) by Captain Jenny.
500 points, ended August 27, 2008, 25 entries
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i understand what you are sayingggg
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Very dark and very deep. I can definately feel your pain through your words. Nicely done.
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wow
very deep and dark,full of sorrow and pain...i feel excactly the same way...but I hope I get a chance to talk to you again...
loved it
I give you 10 points for the truth
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Very good. Can really feel your pain. Hope things get better for you. Thanks for entering
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Wow
I love it!
I like the concept of it, and I think it is such a powerful write! Full of such emotion, I really feel it.
I do think however, periods should have been used in some places to replace commas, but other than that, very good write.
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wow
this is a dark poem just like you said. Its a great poem cuz. makes me feel like you hate your life though but thats your chose. But its a great poem! love ya cuz
Kristie
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