Light turns to dark
Good turns to evil
Warmth turns to cold
White turns to black
Love turns to hate
Happiness to sadness
The heart turns to ice
The soul turns to stone
When you are rejected
When you are alone
Author notes
This is for option 4: Emotional
A contest entry
- everyone loves an options contest :] by etoile.
300 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Honestly.
Comments
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by choosing the emotional option i was hoping for something heart-wrenching, so this just didn't cut it for me.
but i liked the last few lines.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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short and to the point.
didn't like the rhyming,
it was inconsistent.
good luck in emma's contest! -
This poem is sadly true. I like your rhyme scheme too. Good luck and great entry!
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