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The Race

Handsome horses hanging heads,
Ripping and roaring, ready to run!
People pacing, picking preferred,
Choosey choices, chancing all!
Gun goes off - going, going gone!
Watching, waiting, wailing and waving,
Dirty dust dancing down the track.
Steamy steeds stormin’ past stretch!
Greedy gamblers gloat to gang.

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  • lechap
    September 9, 2008
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    A great alliterative glance at a horse race. fantastic imagery on a witty quick paced poem.


  • Jasmine Rayne
    August 30, 2008

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    I love your use of alliteration. It's really cool.

    "Handsome horses hanging heads,
    Ripping and roaring, ready to run!"

    Your description of a horse race is great. ^_^ Thank you so much for entering.







    -Lily♥