More clever than any beast -
Yield to the tongue of the Serpent!
Inauspicious Bellysbabble.
Language of the laughing Devil;
Sprinkled with intoxicating wit.
Infused with bewildering puns.
He is vexed by the malevolent fiend –
Great transformation in the Garden!
And Man’s first brusque defiance,
Bringing Death into the world;
His soul forever to perdition,
Living on a Woman’s shame.
Escape from Eternal Life with Him –
Search for comfort in infernal abode!
The people will act out duplicitously.
They will speak with forked tongues;
Darkness will be called Light,
And evil good, and good evil.
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A contest entry
- THIS TIME i'M GOING TO WIN (pt. 2) by written-in-ink.
1000 points, ended September 13, 2008, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Take a Title and Transform It! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended December 17, 2008, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Very intense. This one DID make me think and I loved the choice of words, very intense. Should write a new version of the bible.
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pretty creepy....
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Good poem, congrats on gold.
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very nice
i liked it very much and good refrence
that was also very nice
thank you so much for entering and good luck to you1 -
thats so beautiful. i really love it. it is so...sinful. a truly compelling write. good luck.
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Thank you so much!
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