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The End

Pretty dolly [glitter eyes and pink nails]
Tell me why is it inside you only yell..

Was this not what you wanted
[you knew one day it would have to end]

There is no more playing :.pretend.:
Intoxicated beauty really hints hard

Nights holding your self
[trying your best not to break]

Thinking over and over
-was it a mistake-

Your eyes they glimmer
like the moon in the sky

Tell me pretty baby -why do you cry-
You have your happy fairytale

What more is it you want[need]
You asked him to stay -you cant beg and pled-

Razor kisses say there goodbyes
[doll I will miss all your lovely lies]

Drug after drug -pointless you know-
Years and years still it was always the same

Life was in repeat -I was to blame-
Only leaving so much shame

Thanks for being fake baby
And [acting] as though you cared

Words hurt more then you’ll even know
[but it’s the end of the show]

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  • Rockenkittie666
    September 18, 2008

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    INCREDIBLE

    Thanx Love, i hope to be a well known poet one day. Thanx alot for giving me your feed back dude. \m/


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 28, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    You do Dirty Pretty very well; there is alot said in this that sometimes can't be said verbally

    Brillant poem!

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • emoskater15
    August 27, 2008
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    wow

    that was really imteresting i like couldnt stop i wanted to read on keep it up luv ya
    kurtis