Your's or Mine?
You know me as yours
And some lovers might not mind
But I am my own
Autumn
The colorful leaves
Slowly falling to the ground
Cloring Landscapes
Cello
Deep vibrating sound
Filling my ears with music
Coming from the heart
Falling
I'm dropping slowly
Falling deep into the black
Someone must catch me
If so, I love You
Do you dream of me
Do you want me night and day
If so, I love you
Author notes
Hope you like my randomness of not terrible-but-coming-close-to-it haiku poems
Haiku is a Japanese style poem that has a specific syllable count
5
7
5
Try writing it, it isn't that terribly hard! LOL
Option 2 I think . . . the Haiku one!
A contest entry
- everyone loves an options contest :] by etoile.
300 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
For a contest!
Comments
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The colorful leaves
Slowly falling to the ground
Cloring Landscapes
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i liked this one
cloring --> coloring.
I'm dropping slowly
Falling deep into the black
Someone must catch me
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this one was my favourite.
but i was hoping for something more like a single-themed haiku.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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yours in the first line doesn't need a comma.
'I'm dropping slowly
Falling deep into the black
Someone must catch me'
I like that a lot.
good luck -
nice haikus...they didn't seem terrible to me!
just one mistake: "Cloring Landscapes" should be "colouring" (or "coloring" if you're American, lol)
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Aw! This is really cool, randomness is next to godliness I say!
It is strange, but even though it is random, it all goes together in a really neat way!! This is a great version and I hope that you do well in the contest! Be be unto you
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